Divine signs

A beggar approaches the empty sanctuary in fear. He shows reverence in his own way, and kneels as he expects not to speak to God, but to hear Him. A feeling overwhelms him while birds sing here and there and the noises of mankind are made audible from a distance. If all was silence, God would be dumb.

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missmfa's picture

Beautiful!

You have used words economically yet the message is loud and clear. A beautiful prose poem!


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saiom's picture

awe in the presence of the Divine

a very beautiful poem... it seems like a vision from God

Your face radiates a oneness with the Lord