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I want to be the face you see, when you close yoUr eyes,I want to be the touch you  need every single night,I want to be yoUr fantasy,I want to you reality,I want to be everything in between,I want  to be the air you breath,I want to be the world   you see, I want to be yoUr deepest kiss,but most of all I want to be the answers to Ur every wish 

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©5 March 2013 - 3:30am — tiffanybabcock
23 March 2013 - 9:54pm — AquarianMale
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I really loved this. I think

I really loved this. I think it needs to be tweaked at bit, e.g., "I want to be you reality." Perhaps "your." I also like the innovative style. Nice.