Are we too lost?

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Take me away

I want to make you laugh



Until you cry

I wonder if you think of me at al



You wanted perfect

I wanted you

Now I'm too Perfect

For someone like you



Losing all the shining

Hypocritical for a while



It's your last chance

To hope for something better



Change your life forever

Before you'll take all the blame

Undeserved, never respected



Even less than would a whore

Unremaining, Unaffected



Lease all this infinite truth

I do not intend to lose



Or satisfy

Tooth for tooth, Eye for eye

(Tabitha's: `Hold the S`)

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ever wished something just was? Ever wanted something to just be? Another frustrated poem, let's not hope it'll afflict ye mood all too much~~

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Afzal Shauq's picture

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