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I WAS WRONG
I jumped the gun, thought i was going to kill someone.
I was so wrong about her.
It wasn't her fault.
What have I done?
Now making it clear why it is that I have no one.
Think I love her.
Is that so wrong?
She ignores it, but my feelings are strong.
I jumped the gun, thought i was going to kill someone.
Should have killed myself.
I would die for her.
I believe she is worth it.
now if this poem is about a personal thing.... I have to tell you ... that NO ONE is worth killing yourself over.... so don't think like that.... now for what I thought of this poem... it was ok... I have written things like this in the heat of the moment... then later was glad that I did not do something that I could not take back... this poem took me to the place where you were at this time... the emotion in this was very powerful... keep writing and don't kill yourself or anyone else... Jail is not a fun place.... I know you are thinking DUH... but anyway...I liked this... thank you for sharing this with all of us.... Renee' have a nice day.... :O)
your not kidding you really were wrong kid!