Your smile illuminated your face
Your demeanor,full of grace
Was like angels, glistening in white
Dancing in the Light of Christ
When I was sad
You let me cry on your shoulder
Your support as strong as a big boulder
As your love and joy won me over
When I was glad
You cheered me on
Encouraged me, cherished me
With your beauty, I now clearly see
Thank you for shining the Light of Christ
That is so evident in your life
Thank you for your sparkling smile
And the glimour of grace shining in your eyes
Patricia, this poem has a really catchy intro and outro to it, I feel like the rhymes in it are really well done for it. The poem itself is written well, however the middle two stanzas did not seem to flow as well as the beginning and end.