An Angel in Disguise

Your smile illuminated your face

Your demeanor,full of grace

Was like angels, glistening in white

Dancing in the Light of Christ



When I was sad

You let me cry on your shoulder

Your support as strong as a big boulder

As your love and joy won me over



When I was glad

You cheered me on

Encouraged me, cherished me

With your beauty, I now clearly see



Thank you for shining the Light of Christ

That is so evident in your life

Thank you for your sparkling smile

And the glimour of grace shining in your eyes

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem, originally written 4/9/07, was dedicated to my disicpler when she helped me through some really tough times

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Kyle Ong's picture

Patricia, this poem has a really catchy intro and outro to it, I feel like the rhymes in it are really well done for it. The poem itself is written well, however the middle two stanzas did not seem to flow as well as the beginning and end.