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"Complete Serenity"
A never ending thought,
it lingers.
My mind never stopping,
no sleep.
Always moving and wondering,
never relaxing in serenity.
Always a thought, a plan, a secret,
LINGERING!
Never giving me rest,
that moment of no worries.
No fear of tomorrow,
or the years to come.
Is this feeling of serenity,
and peace ever felt?
Or is it just a myth,
brought on by the dreams of many.
I believe there is a place and time,
of no worries or thoughts of tomorrow.
That place and time,
is death.
True that!!It is Death.But u can feel it right now,If u can die(dive) so deep with in yourself.There it is.Thoughts are outer,There is no peace Never there.In the surface there is turbulence like a sea.Thoughts are the surface waves.And beneath,the sea is calm.So is deep down you are SERENE.
Nice work here.Really thought-ful.
Hey,but if you r looking for peace,Be thought-less:)
i didn't see that coming. your ending was like a punch in the stomach. not bad, suspense is what keeps us reading, so wow to you.
MR