you know you make me sick
no colour, no radience, no more glow and shine
why can't you feel me
you know you no longer thrill me
come here and hear my breath
hits so hard it scratches and scars
burning everything to the ground
all of the things that you couldn't ever say to me
This cuts like a knife though
This cuts like a knife though butter and dissects your soul! Realm about fucking brilliant! (Except that lastline needs a tweak) but still fucking love it! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
i have never before heard
i have never before heard 'tweak' and 'line' used in the same sentence that didn't mean something sketchy.
<3 ty you're too kind to me. i'm less than even like okay. you're leagues and leagues above my skill and it means heaps that you don't tink i suck (because i do)
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I think you're leagues ahead,
I think you're leagues ahead, even when you're just mucking around I find brilliance in your so called mediocrity I feel I'm the amateur sometimes when I read your works. Trust in what you have it is of far more value to us readers! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
you're the best really.
you're the best really. you're like crack without the negative effects and the willingness to suck dick to score it for the ego <3.
that was ''wow'':)
that was ''wow'':)
i don't know if that's good
i don't know if that's good or bad but thank you :p