Like a placid lake flowing over pure gold
A pure perfection that no one but God could mold
With sincerity and truth it lies behind
That no gaze could break without a hate of a kind
A great big snow wrapped gently around the soul
A dark, round blackness with depth of an endless hole
Perfectly balanced between is a great fire
Of a crimson and brown; the whole of my desire
It shades and moves in the rythm of my heart
It flashes and beams with ev'ry thought on my part
It is a portal to every emotion
When our gazes meet everything stops motion
It's an endless peace that no one can break now
A peace full of excitement and love endowed
I know through the tears we cry, it will be sign
Of forever love; his gaze will always be mine
Nice rhythm and good rhyme. A
Nice rhythm and good rhyme. A good read.
A great big snow wrapped
A great big snow wrapped gently around the soul
Love that line!!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I love this absolutely! I
I love this absolutely! I would lve to do a collaboration poem with you just to see how it would turn out!
Collaboration Poem
I have never done a collaboration poem, but I am totally willing to try it out with you!