There is a thing which cannot be seen, it is like winter's tired breath
Exhaled across powder snow, and through leafless trees
I am certain you have met this ethereal void
For I have found no one who denies its presence
One need only sit alone in a dark room and wait, it will come
Though incorporeal, it can be felt
In the same way one can feel a person staring from across the park
You know it by its chilling touch on your arms and neck
Flowing across the hairs on your back
You likely tell yourself it is imagined, that you have caused the sensation
With the strangeness tucked away in your mind
Do not be fooled into thinking yourself unique
We all have thoughts we dare not think
Let us ponder this fact, for everyone has experienced it
All who've lived have been caressed by that shivery hand
One must ask their self of the meaning of this occurrence
For numberless others have felt the same trepidation
Should that knowledge be a comforting thought and a relief?
Or perhaps does it mean that there truly stands a formless figure beside you
As you squirm, vexed in silent thought with that dreadful feeling
Of being watched while you sit alone in a dark room
Although it is not a ghost
Although it is not a ghost story, as far as I can tell, it reads like one and has the same tone of terror.
Starward
things that go bump
I'm of the same opinion as
I'm of the same opinion as you in regards to ghosts and such. Although my wife is terribly afraid of that sort of thing so it was on my mind..
I do find it amusing that I still get goosebumps from certain things of that sort though. Haha
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Just Re-Read
This poem is so very well sculpted it carried me along so effortlessly and artistically. The dark is there and we seek light, create it, but it has qualities that affect us, some intrinsic or ancient fear - danger came from the darkness before fire or some such. Great write. Enjoyed a 2nd time :D ~Lady A~