so hard i try, every night i cry.
your not in my life,i jsut want to die.
your my heart my life my love my soul,
with out you i spiral out of control.
every night i always pray,
for that one special day.
when you come to me,
and our names can be carved togeather in a tree.
so jessi please be true,
and rescue me from a life of bein blue.
because your the only one for me,
so give me a chance and let our love bloom like a tree.
so let me prove to you that i am true,
but all i can say is baby i love you.
This poem is so sweet Chad. I never knew that you had such strong feelings for me in the beginning. I love you lots!!!!!!!
lovely work
Awwww... okay well my critique is the same as the last, but what else can i say. This one is also really romantic. I love it!! awwwww....