That Feeling I Once Had

Out in the falling rain is where i stand

Covered in water I look at my hands

Blood is dripping from my wrists onto them

Red is all over and I am now weak

My problems have been way too much for me

I look at you and you just look away

You couldnt possibly know how this feels

I tried to make us last but you didn't

You didn't try, you didn't even care

Suicide is the only solution

Darkness is where I am and I can't leave

Are you going through this pain too, or not?

I remember everything you said

To think I thought that I was in love with you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this poem for my writing classes assignment and it was supposed to be a sonnet poem but the teacher said it didnt have to rhyme. 2002.

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