All Said And Done...

As I sit on my bed,
It feels as though I'm already dead,
As I sit there awake,
My dark shuddering thoughts make me quake,
I sit there thinking that no one cares,
Everyone just stands there and stares,
My one and only thought is with a gun,
One pull on the trigger and it's all done,
No one tried to stop me,
They didn't care and let me be,
Now the only decision left is to live or die,
I look back and ask myself why,
I realize that the choice I make will be my last,
Everything now is done and in the past,
Soon it is all said and done,
My life ended with a gun.

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MyinsecureSelf's picture

at least you would go out

at least you would go out with a bang right?? lol jk that's terrible..
I like this poem a lot because i can relate so well, i often lay in my bed and feel the same way
Good writing

ThatCaptainguy's picture

Yeah i spent a lot of time on

Yeah i spent a lot of time on this piece

strawberrryjenn's picture

wow

this is outstanding!!! beautiful. perfection.


forever and always <3 Jenn

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Thank you so much, im glad

Thank you so much, im glad you liked it:) make sure to read the rest