Hopelessly Devoted

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I see death, and I say bye
Everybody here must die...
I say cry, and said goodbye,
You will have to hear me sigh...

I gave breath, and I may dry
Everyone here must lie...
I may fly, and break the sky,
You will have to ask me why...

Hopelessly devoted
Constantly eloping
Nights idly pass by,
Maybe you will catch me high...

I went left, and I turned right
Somebody here has insight...
I turned sights, and spent daylight
You will have to soar to new heights....

I became deaf, and I learned fright
Someone here must bite...
I learned spite, and seek might
You will have to be alright...

Hopelessly devoted
Consistently proclaiming
Knight in shining armor,
Maybe you will catch me bright...

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a.griffiths57's picture

  Well done Knight in shining

 

Well done Knight in shining ,armour liked your poetry and the rhyming  too. 


 

 

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Thanks, I recently got back

Thanks, I recently got back into writing 

Elfy's picture

Your armor ,will always be

Your armor ,will always be bright, and so very shiney. It will never tarnish, or fade. Wear your armor proud, cause it is beautifull and should be such a honor to have it. Your a beautifull knight, and a great writer. I love this poem.


-Elfy*

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Thank you make sure to read

Thank you make sure to read my other pieces