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sorry im late
The rain falls dripped on my window causing it to fog it makes it hard to see the car drift from side to side i should just pull over and let pass but im to stubborn so i just punch the gas holding on for dear life but i can miss this chance to see my potential wife for this is the night we first meet almost 3 years ago Ive missed the last to times i wont miss this one the clock hit hits midnight
and still im nowhere in sight she gets angry wishing she had never meet me even if she is caring my baby as of lately she has noticed that ive been shady she has had it and is fed up she goes to bed but little she knows ill never make it home my car is wrapped around a pole tonight was going to be special for i wad going to ask for her hand but my
Ignorance has sealed my fate im so sorry i missed our date
I like this a lot, it reminds
I like this a lot, it reminds me just a bit of a pearl jam song. I like the content of this poem a lot, although it was a bit hard to read due to the lack of punctuation. A few periods or commas would make it easier to read, and It would also let the reader understand where you paused while writing it. May I ask what inspired this poem?
hi
yes sorry about that i do need to work on that most of the time i just use my phone when i get a good idea ill work on that and as far as what inspired me, well talking to a girl who broke my heart while it was raining i love the rain and was going to meet her . so i went from there and just added some things and thank you for the input as you can tell im not a strong writer i just like to vent via poem