"Imagine being born perfect"
I exclaimed, enamored
I exuded, besotted
Guiding many to witness
A grand
engraving
of celestials.
a bellow from their ramparts-
"There will be no greater masterpiece".
Your features exist to us as mere
excerpts of their full astral complexity,
an infallible hand in a pond
or a sprite's wings in our world,
epitomized only as far
as we could perceive.
Your spellcasting eyes of tourmaline are
as rich grain fields and just as fertile with love, unthreaded.
You must
have
known
this,
confidently,
&
without
demur
simply,
intimately of course...
My words tremble with you.
My lips are yours to have.
My heart is yours to break.
proverbially of course...
absolutely,
I instead worship the loam beneath you, literally,
that you seraphically skate delicately.
My ore of exaltation melting for you
in a furnace of envy that I couldn't be
born as utterly perfect
Every thunder-struck line
Every thunder-struck line spilled into the next with such impeccable, shattering eloquence I can only say: Congratulations!
I just witnessed greatness. For that immense pleasure, thank you!
Wow ty
You're so nice to me. I've never felt as though I was any "good" persay at expressing myself but I'm glad to hear it resonates with someone as accomplished