I love him,
I love him,
like the stars
between night and days,
beyond foamed of time,
I love him.
I love him,
I love him
like the light
from the sweet moon,
caress the night away
un-misted by day
of timeless hours,
I love him
I love him so warmly
that even the cold wintry night
repent at my love for him
like a weaken heat
through the night.
I love him.
So much I wish my life asleep
hidden within the clouds of his heart.
I love him always will i love him
that I would make the stars in the heaven jealous,
that even the moon.
I love the similes and personification you've used here. It draws out a really nice picture of young love. Keep writing. I love your work.
Sincerely,
Nicole Esparza
Beautiful poem.