I LOVE HIM, I LOVE HIM

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      I love him,

      I love him,

      like the stars

      between night and days,

      beyond foamed of time,

       I love him.

        I love him,

        I love him

        like the light

      from the sweet moon,

      caress the night away

       un-misted by day

     of timeless hours,

     I love him

      I love him so warmly

    that even the cold wintry night

    repent at my love for him

    like a weaken heat

    through the night.

    I love him.

     So much I wish my life asleep

    hidden within the clouds of his heart.

   I love him always will i love him

   that I would make the stars in the heaven jealous,

    that even the moon.

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Nicole Esparza's picture

I love the similes and personification you've used here. It draws out a really nice picture of young love. Keep writing. I love your work.

Sincerely,
Nicole Esparza

fighter4life's picture

Beautiful poem.