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  There is a fine line between love and hate. That always

   seems to seal our fate. When you give your all. Your

   love your dreams your soul your future, all that you

   behold, then comes all that your betrayed and nothing else

   matters,all the lies that come between us becomes torn

  and tattered. You were my hero at one time and then you

  pushed me to that fine line. When love turns to hate it will

forever close that gate. You will always have a place in

  my heart, but maybe by crossing that line I can make a

   new start.

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This was written by my friend Joy after she got betrayed by her boyfriend

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©31 May 2007 - 2:44pm — teresa_r
9 November 2010 - 9:01pm — sanctus
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Excellent Wonderful words

Excellent
Wonderful words

11 August 2007 - 4:52am — Shellysweetness
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DAMN i LOVE THiS POEM. THATS TOTALLY HOW i FEEL. i NO WHAT YOUR GOiNG THROUGH. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK YOU HAVE TALENT

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9 November 2010 - 7:10pm — heatherburns35
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there is a fine line

hi teresa,    glad to find yor poem again...I am just finding my way around this site.....

this poem is so  true, there is a fine line between love and hate.....one defines

the other, I think....The cross over is so easy.....you have expresed these emotions

so well..enjoyed the read...heather