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three days ago
Three days ago I thought I saw
how fragile people were
so I cried for hopes and dreams
and needs and want desire hunger
but now I see fragility
is something that's more within me
that I had only noticed what
i'd seen reflected on their faces
this poem makes you think, i
this poem makes you think, i really like it. it is interesting how you say,
"but now I see fragility is something that's more within me
that I had only noticed what
i'd seen reflected on their faces" it is a great comparison to the beginning of your poem
thanks so much for the kind
thanks so much for the kind comment!
sad
this is so deep, but beautiful at the same time.
i love it
-- Jordan <3
Thank you! :)
Thank you! :)