Before the Shower

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2001

The sudden stream of heated water spurts from the above

faucet and drenches me with the warm downpour



I initially begin to lather certain portions of my sweaten

body as the gusts of invigorating steam swirl about in an

effortless ballet

Remembering of the passion that was exchanged just before

the shower minutes ago



The gentle rush of steam reminding me of your breath,

trickling down my neck alerting tens of thousands of

excited pores in my skin



The lather slowly oozing down my back grants me to

recall of your fingers gliding, tickling my skin with a

lover's caress



And the water throbbing and pushing my body reminds me

of your body, your presence on top of mine shifting and

swaying with your arms and legs outstretched, wrapped

around mine

Climaxing in the grand finale with your body, our body

rejoicing in quenching ecstasy, together.



Suddenly, the door slides open.



It is you in naked beauty

You come to me

And your breath begins trickling down my neck...  

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poetvg's picture

aweseome piece
im gald you
made it . :*).

Daniela C's picture

Showers are wonderful, no? And this is totally absolutely what I'm talking about when I'm in showers. It's like a blanket of heat. Mmm... I'm gonna... go and take a shower right now.

Teresa Jacobs's picture

This is a really good poem. I think I want to take a shower now! Ooooh, I can't get enough of your words. I really like and will read more. Thanks for sharing.

Ashley Cameron's picture

This is a very interesting poem! Very well written, very discriptive.Well done!! ~Ash