Why did I treat you with such noble admiration
For my admiral disregarded my being and abandoned
ship far too soon.
Why did I waste those countless nights wallowing in tears
of regret and disillusion because you left.
Tears you assumed were from a mere broken heart
are instead raging rivers filled with the anguish from
a ruptured will
Rivers draining into a forever-spanning ocean,
My ocean,
of sadness, anger, and weight-pulling despair.
Why did you have to abandon me on this day?
Didn't you know I couldn't swim alone, all by myself?
I'm struggling, reaching out to grasp for you guiding hand
as the waters overtakes my slender body, with you, not
there to pull me out.
The salty waters of sorrow and grief begin to
take in my lungs.
My legs, kicking and padding, trying to reach the distant
surface, when I see in a short distance a tiny island
set amongst the chaotic waves of the unrelenting ocean.
The island is now within reach and I hoist my beaten body
onto this newfound land.
I take in gulps of the delicious fresh air to soon find
Inner-peace
A bizarre yet welcoming sense of tranquility while sitting
here on this island,
My island,
Recuperating from the destruction you have guided in my
direction.
Over time, I soon find that the love I once had for you
is no longer present
Completely dissolved, those sentimental feelings has gone
spiraled down the drain
As did my ocean of sorrow, the tides has now lessen to
meager puddles to bypass
I can look back at my past that you have obliterated, and
I can now look forward to a fruitful and prosperous future
Without you
Once an inescapable maelstrom, now an insignificant
obstruction
I am ready to begin anew
Without u
An amazing write. I hope to read some more
HI~ I tip my hat to you,such a nice feeling one & of deep truth,an ending ia always a wonderful new start,and me living on an island,really like it thanks,your writings are always getting better L&P
WIOW! Good poem. I am going back to read it again.
I just lost the love of my dreams. Your poem is truly inspirational, and my days will be easier knowing that there is someone else out there who knows what it is like. The poem touched me deep.
Quite a powerful story u jus weaved. I enjoyed reading it. The flow is really admirable....and i think i like the 'Tears you assumed were from a mere broken heart...are instead raging rivers filled with the anguish from a ruptured will' Very poignant, very passionately charged. With shades of forlorn sadness, and yet with strong will at the end. Most lovely poem. I am glad to have known u here, Keith. I sincerely welcome u to POstpoems ... hope your stay here will be a pleasant one.Smilesz.