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My Dear Brother
My dear Brother, free of sin.
Walk not toward the endless night.
A mind so clear must not be hazed.
A heart so tall must not be razed.
Oh, my so beloved kin.
Drift not toward the absent light.
A will so firm must never jitter.
A love so sweet must never bitter.
This is
This is nice...
Compliments:
- "Dear Brother, free of sin" is very attention grabbing and eloquent.
- Good use of the word jitter...
- Interesting way to describe darkness as drifting towards an absent light.
Questions:
- What was YOUR meaning behind this poem? :)
Cheers,
Adam_San
TY for the response. I wrote
TY for the response. I wrote this for my little brother. He had done something that made me realize how much he loved me so I felt I had to write something for him.
no probs :) yeah, love for
no probs :) yeah, love for family is quite a treasure, good for you travis.
Cheers,
Adam_San