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In The Velvet Of The Night
Sitting alone,
In the velvet of night...
A cool crisp storm rolls in,
As the rain starts to fall...
So do my tears that start to dwindle down from my hazel eyes,
A meager breeze blows...
It caresses my skin like a tender touch,
My mind starts to wonder...
I can't seem to get you out of my mind,
Your touch...
Your eyes...
Your voice...
Sitting alone,
In the velvet of night...
I feel you so close,
Even though we're so far apart...
My lips yearn for you luscious kisses,
My body cries out loud for you bodies embrace...
I'm just sitting alone in the velvet of the night,
Wishing you were here....
Great imagery that made me
Great imagery that made me interested to keep on reading, good job!
i liked this
very much, so much so, it inspired me to write a similar poem
peace
Dyaln
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
I really like this piece, the
I really like this piece, the only thing i noticed was the list right in the middle doesnt quite fit with the rest of the poem.