Brown Eyes

Meeting you wasn't something I had planned
The smile we shared that day
Left a feeling I can't forget
The wall I built around my heart
Started to crumble and break
You brought out an old me
No one had seen in years
I promised myself I would never feel this way again
Until those brown eyes changed everything
The tears started to fall
I couldn't hold them back
You embraced me so tight
All I could see
Was the love in your brown eyes
Everything is better when you're around
I think about you all the time
I'm glad I'm all yours
It all started with those brown eyes

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For my brown eyed love...

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Fitzgerald's picture

Smoothie is right .. very

Smoothie is right .. very beautiful poem.

SSmoothie's picture

This is beautiful!

Hadn't seen this, glad I had a chance to se it, it's something to be proud of! Cheers SS.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

tattooedangel192007's picture

Thank you so much SS for

Thank you so much SS for reading it... it means alot...


Crystal A Cupak

tattooedangel192007's picture

I'd like to thank everyone

I'd like to thank everyone who read my poems... it truely means alot to me.... and for people to leave me a comment on my work is even more then I could expect.. I'd love to become a full time poetry writer and have books published one day. But for now I'm just taking everything one step at a time... Thank y'all again, I truely can't say it enough!

Xoxo Tattooed Angel Xoxo


Crystal A Cupak

brokenbrandie's picture

Absolutely lovely

Absolutely lovely

saiom's picture

a love story... a beautiful

a love story... a beautiful variation on this most ancient of tales