Travelling north my friend
Warm days never end
Where I can be
Like a bird, so free.
Tropical breeze
No need to freeze
This heart of mine
In the warm sunshine.
You will see me soar
As my feelings thaw
I reach the highest highs
AND my body sighs....
An enjoyable piece. Thank you.
this one is so light and easy.... I loved it... and the ending is great... you are one real poet.... you can be serious and then you can change in the blink of an eye and be light and care free.... I like that... take care... and thank you for letting me get in on this new one.... have a good day Renee' :O)
Tanya, I like that it ends how it does....very clever..lets the reader take part, and when you finally "sigh" almost as that chapter of you life is over..I don't know I just like it!! Very good! Keep up the great work!!!
So much said within so simple a piece. You are a lady of great emotion & it really shows. Your Canadian friend: Amy
I like the lightness of this...and personally ....I like the ending.....I think it really fits the poem. great job