Sunshiny Days

Travelling north my friend

Warm days never end

Where I can be

Like a bird, so free.

Tropical breeze

No need to freeze

This heart of mine

In the warm sunshine.

You will see me soar

As my feelings thaw

I reach the highest highs

AND my body sighs....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just some pleasant thoughts ...seems to finish a little abruptly though.

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Deborah E Russell's picture

An enjoyable piece. Thank you.

Renee''s picture

this one is so light and easy.... I loved it... and the ending is great... you are one real poet.... you can be serious and then you can change in the blink of an eye and be light and care free.... I like that... take care... and thank you for letting me get in on this new one.... have a good day Renee' :O)

~Me'lyn~'s picture

Tanya, I like that it ends how it does....very clever..lets the reader take part, and when you finally "sigh" almost as that chapter of you life is over..I don't know I just like it!! Very good! Keep up the great work!!!

Ariberdy's picture

So much said within so simple a piece. You are a lady of great emotion & it really shows. Your Canadian friend: Amy

Michelle's picture

I like the lightness of this...and personally ....I like the ending.....I think it really fits the poem. great job