I looked to the sky
and there I found
a sparkle, a star
not meant to be earthbound.
A lifetime of sorrow,
a mountain of pain
has now become free
and felt in the soft summer rain.
Your youthful days
so full of life
the pain of later
cut like a knife.
A body once active and whole
now just a memory
an empty bowl.
You didnt stop trying
you never gave up
always ready to drink from the friendship cup.
I smile at the memory your friendship brings
and know you are watching
on angels wings.
good work
on this piece
I posted your angel poem @ my angel club: Stop by and post some more please. :)
Please stop by and post your angel poems to my angel club:
This is so sweet and heart felt. It warms me and eases my own heart when I read it
You have a very special way of writting from the heart. Don't stop. I really enjoyed reading some of your poems. Keep up the good work... Take care and if you have a chance come by and read some of my poetry. Thanks for sharing your work.
Oh my god that is wonderful. It made me cry...Thank you. Its beautiful.
As always, I truly enjoy your work. The emotion is so strong, so deep & so real. I feel this loss & my heart goes to the memory of the person decribed here. You have a deep & meanigful style that encourages me to continue to follow your postings. Amy
Tanya, I thought that this was a great poem.... and it was a nice tribute to your friend.... it was not at all mushy.... I thought it was well thought out and heart felt.... face it... it was very well written and was a nice and enjoyable read.... my favorite part of this poem was ..... Your youthful days, so full of life, the pain of later, cut like a knife... the imagery of this part just hit me hard.... it could be about you ... or your friend....very powerful poem.... thank you for letting me know about this one.... I have posted a new one The Black Widow... if you have time would like for you to read it and let me know what you think of this one..... take care and have a good day.... Renee'