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Profanity (day 8)
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365 Day Challenge (kinda) Profanity falls from the memory of you
I’m moments away from exploding
I tear out my hair with false logic
and slip away cursing your name
I don’t want to tell you my secrets
Profanity’s not even worth anything
But when I speak it’s rare, that should
tell you how destructive you’ve been
Profanity falls from the memory of you
I’m moments away from exploding
I tear out my hair with false logic
and slip away cursing your name
A lifetime brings up more silence
and words I don’t want to ignore
so I reach out and push them away
the curses I’ve sung and written before
Profanity falls from the memory of you
I’m moments away from exploding
I tear out my hair with false logic
and slip away cursing your name
You penetrate every single corner
our laughter still rings in my head
I’m willing to cry for a thousand years
overthinking what we never said
and suddenly I realize what the hell,
why am I swearing for you and sighing
when you can’t even tell me what happened,
I don’t even know your handwriting.
So funny,
I almost did this word,
but I couldn't compete with this,
very well written!
I especially enjoyed the ending.
(^^)
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Thank you so much!
that means a lot, aww, you should do it! I don't want to hold you back and I'm sure yours would be very different from mine. I love your style!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
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This had a RoC feel to it. Enjoyed the rhythm and the rhyme.
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Wow, that's such an amazing
Wow, that's such an amazing compliment! Especially since rhythm is one of the things I feel like I have trouble with, which is why I'm usually more satisfied when I write songs/more repetitive style poems. Thank you so much :)
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Repetition
Brings a rhythm of its own ilk. When you write your voice is genuine. Thoroughly enjoy your writes ~A~