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Demeter's Frown
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Juvenilia Happiness can be found
On a cool spring day
You are easily convinced
That bliss is here to stay
The sunshine bathes the hillside
In pleasant shades of green
You are quickly filled with awe
From wonders yet unseen
The day holds such potential
You now sing for joy
But the wonderfully smiling sun
Is wonderfully coy
The rainclouds hide beyond the hills
And they will soon be here
A wind that warns of brewing storms
Brings the omen near
The sun begins to hide away
And hillsides fade to grey
You're filled with a forewarning of
The end of your bright day
The sky is quickly changing
From its shade of sapphire blue
If fades and darkens freely
To a silver all anew
The rain begins to fall and chill
Your heart's becoming cold
You feel your soul begin to freeze
The darkness is so bold
And now the winter's come
And you have never smiled
For you are ever-frozen as
A bitter spring rain child.
I like your transition, of how the lines interlace to slowly bring from one emotion to the other.