I remember us floating down this river
in the "Titanic" of imperishable.
The rocks in the water moved aside.
The bank seemed to hug our souls
with passion that was unmeasurable
as heartbeats of rapids confide.
Like immortals we dropped our oars
and threw out our life-vest.
Insanely we didn't respect the river.
We challenged it to sink the moment
and put this love to the test.
Undaunted it splashed us to shiver.
When I awoke along the bank side,
I realized we never moved.
The river had just held us in place.
You, my love, were across the way
and the river smiled and approved.
There was no bridge between our space.
I looked at you grabbing your chest
holding out one arm to me,
then decided what your love was worth.
I promise I never left you, my love;
I cried and turned with destiny,
then walked the distance of the earth.
When I finally reached our river,
I searched for you my darling.
The trees on the bank moved aside.
Honey, when I saw you in the twilight,
I noticed your eyes still sparkling.
As heartbeats of rapids confide.
i give this
one a passing score .