The day rose with beauty
a smile blossomed
with the dawning,
yet held a hint of cruelty
within the beating
of her heart,
harsh were words
upon her breath
and mighty fell her
swords of ice
as dawn dissolved
to grey.
The progression is from hope to a dismal ending. Nicely done, sweetwater! Beautiful writing this - allets -
Thank you :-) I haven't written (or read ) anything lately, too caught up in helping family move so my mind wasn't free to wander, but I hope to catch up now. X
Personification of Day
The progression is from hope to a dismal ending. Nicely done, sweetwater! Beautiful writing this - allets -
Thank you :-) I haven't
Thank you :-) I haven't written (or read ) anything lately, too caught up in helping family move so my mind wasn't free to wander, but I hope to catch up now. X