April Day.

The day rose with beauty

a smile blossomed

with the dawning,

yet held a hint of cruelty

within the beating

of her heart,

harsh were words

upon her breath

and mighty fell her

swords of ice

as dawn dissolved

to grey.

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Personification of Day

The progression is from hope to a dismal ending. Nicely done, sweetwater! Beautiful writing this - allets -

 


 

 

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Thank you :-) I haven't

Thank you :-) I haven't written (or read ) anything lately, too caught up in helping family move so my mind wasn't free to wander, but I hope to catch up now. X