Silent Shore.

The hours flow past

with waves that break

at midnight's door.

Dawn, defiant pulls

the day awake,

calls the lonely tide

to lap the shore

with silence

once again.

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a.griffiths57's picture

Silent Shore

A lovely poem here sweetwater - truly love the dramatic imagery and also it's calming and sooting effect the tidal movement can bring about. Love this poem.


 

 

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Thank you very much, I'm so

Thank you very much, I'm so pleased you like it so much Sue :-)

bishu's picture

Felt the serenity

Felt the serenity & the soft swishing music of the sea-waves.Loved it !!!


©bishu 

 

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Thank you so much Bishu xx

Thank you so much Bishu xx

Blackwingedbird's picture

Lovely.

Lovely.

sweetwater's picture

Thank you so much :-) Sue.

Thank you so much :-) Sue.

allets's picture

Quiet Shore

like the pulling of the day awake line - cool write, nice portrait in motion - Lady A -


 

 

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Thank you very much Lady A,

Thank you very much Lady A, :-) Sue.