Leaves drift down,
mere moments in time
quickly lost,
falling beyond the hand.
Catching our dreams
as they pass,
to lie broken beneath
our feet.
Loved the progression of leaves capturing dreams as if that was an attribute of leaves that fall. Nicely woven lyric, and now I know where all my dreams that did not happen went and how they were broken. A fine piece - Lady A -
Thank you so much, you have captured what I was trying to say perfectly, that is exactly how my brain was thinking about my own lost dreams. Sue xx
Dreams
Loved the progression of leaves capturing dreams as if that was an attribute of leaves that fall. Nicely woven lyric, and now I know where all my dreams that did not happen went and how they were broken. A fine piece - Lady A -
Thank you so much, you have
Thank you so much, you have captured what I was trying to say perfectly, that is exactly how my brain was thinking about my own lost dreams. Sue xx