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Sunset Words.
Guilt rides lower in the sky
slowly skims horizon's line,
as sunset calls those fading words
held unforgiving, beneath the eye
to fall beside the dusk of time.
Guilt rides lower in the sky
slowly skims horizon's line,
as sunset calls those fading words
held unforgiving, beneath the eye
to fall beside the dusk of time.
Well done
I really liked this one. Short and powerful! The sun holds so much symbolism and I like how your poem catches that
So sorry for late reply, I
So sorry for late reply, I didn't realise I had a comment. Thank you very much I appreciate your words a great deal. Sue :)
Eloquent Tears
Beautiful - A -
Thank you :-)
Thank you :-)