Downpour.

How wantonly does

the sky weep,

heartbroken clouds

let fall their sadness.

The day grey,

disillusioned,

breathes despair

upon the trees.

Drip chases drip

as leaves unleash

their burden

to puddle, listless

beneath their feet.

 

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Whispers_From_The_Mind's picture

it reminds me

i like it. it reminds me of nature being sad.

sweetwater's picture

That's exactly how I saw it

That's exactly how I saw it too. So glad you liked it, thank you :-) Sue.

deepinyourdreams's picture

I like it'

I like it'


"Deepinyourdreams"

sweetwater's picture

Hi Thank you, I'm glad you

Hi Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)