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My LIfe
My life is what you gave
My life is what you saved
My life is what I live
My life is what I give
My life is something so , so small
As I hear the echoing off the walls
Far down that dark dark path
Is a lone mirage I see
With what I see
With my wonderous eyes
Was a mirror with nothing but me inside
As I gazed so hard
I almost cried
For what the mirror held
Was the lonlyness that had become
My life
A well written poem that I cant Exactly relate too. Though I think this poem vaguely relates to most people, I cant say I own the consept of this poem. I can however see a little bit of what its like to be you. you had a slight wording problem on lines nine and ten, but its nothing.
*sighs*......again very true!!!*sobs*
I like this poem a lot. It speaks of passion and energy that I can relate to. Thanks for sharing and I hope you post more.
J