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Fantasy thoughts

I’m thinking of you…

I wonder …do you ever think of me?

I’m dreaming of you…

Thinking much more then the eye can see.

What can we be?

Together,

…Or just a fantasy?

A picture in my head

Wondering thoughts of you,

Cloud my mind

Mix up my life

I’d wait forever

Could you and I be, ever?

My thoughts travel,

My feelings unravel,

Lost inside myself,

Screaming help,

Trying to explain everything I've felt

I’m thinking of you

Are you thinking of me?

Is this fake or is it reality?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

:)There are nights when I lay in my bed and just ache because I fantasize about this person so much that it kills me … …I just think about the times that we have been together and try to brush it off…

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©22 July 2002 - 12:13pm — sweetiepeachy
15 January 2003 - 10:45pm — poetvg
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AMAZING POEM .

11 October 2002 - 5:01am — Trina Vela (not verified)
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Erica, You are such a great writer. Everytime I read one of your poems, I feel like I can realate in some way. I love that. You are such a sweetheart. You are very pretty, never let anyone take advantage of that! You are wonderfuL!
Always Katrina

10 August 2002 - 11:33pm — Ray Dunlap (not verified)
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I like it....it is really good!