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perfectly over, the day before it began

i wish to begin this with you

sitting on the end of a bed

feet on the floor

elbows on your knees

face in your hands

wet with tears

from your big blue eyes

head filled with every moment

you felt loved

when you loved

putting everything into you heart

and causing it to break

under the pressure

to have you think

it didn't have to end

if you had done something

different

to have there never be enough answers

for the questions you ask

and to find doubt now

in every thought you have

i want to begin this there

in the same spot i was

when you said goodbye

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i felt inspired to tell you what i feel right now. to let you know of the other emotion behind my "sexy" (i think what's what you called them) brown eyes. to help you realize that negativity is just realism in desguise... and love is for the stories i dream up at night. the end is beautiful, but my great american novel isn't done.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 4:37am
©13 January 2004 - 5:47am — sweetdreams
13 January 2004 - 1:01pm — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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you felt loved
when you loved

TRUTH.

(under the pressure
[to have you think)
it didn't have to end]

BEAUTY.

John Keats once wrote, and he's very popular for writing this: "Beauty is truth, truth beauty. That is all ye know in this world and all ye need to know." I disagree completely.

pessimism = realism
optimism = realism
pessimism = realism = optimism

pessimism = optimism