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waisted hours
i will spend the rest of this life
thinking about that time you
brushed the hair out my eye
when you said
it was blocking you from seeing
the tears well up after you
spoke softly into
my right ear
to tell me what
i always needed to hear
without waiting for a response
you reached over
and gently
sincerly
brushed my hair away from my face
and i cried
trying to tell you
about the gift you just gave me
my ear still tingeling
remembering your warm breath
as it passed by
carrying those sweet words
that produced the smile
the tear
the rest of my life
is just waisted hours
spent thinking of your voice
your hand
your eyes
looking into mine
searching for a reply
my tears saying thank you
each and every one
i will wake up every morning
hearing your whisper in my mind
and sleep everynight
to your touch
i am beautiful
i will spend the rest of this life
thinking about that time you
brushed the hair out my eye
when you said
it was blocking you from seeing the
tears well up after you
spoke softly into
my right ear
to tell me what
i always needed to hear
Very nice. It's like one big, long sentence. And I really like the "blocking you from seeing" line. My suggestion: put the 'the' on the next line. That way, instead of "blocking you from seeing the", it will just say "blocking you from seeing" and thus, you have the double meanings like I like to do.
That's just.. what I would do if I were you.
well you may think that but you did have virtigo and in the words of Even "virtigo is the greatest excuse for everything; you could pass out on the floor and just blame it on virtigo."