trapped inside
why envy you
your wide eyed
painful love
you give
and take
make up for
their hate
all the years
they wanted you
and the moment
they left you alone
you were loved
on the inside
sharp whispers
in the form of
goodbye
you were too good
for their darkness
tucked inside
your rough exterior
you were
the only one
i love
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?