i wrote you in

i'm writing a new story

i want it to begin with you

do you think you can handle

the way i turn the pages?



do you know that you can

make this well worth the read

well worth the long time effort

i'm writing you in



your world will be described

the way i see it

with me



i promise to make you

the hero of this story



i needed a strong beginning

who else would i choose

let's make this last forever



i'm writing a new story

i've written you into the ending

(and all the sequels too)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i had the ending first... like always. what can i say, strong endings make me happy. so enjoy this or meet your doom.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

suggestion: put a last line of this saying "I'm writing you in,after all you are my life..."

Josh Glasgow's picture

i needed a strong beginning

After reading the comment, this became wonderful.

do you think you can handle
the way i turn the pages?

FANTASTIC line.

i've written you into the ending
(and all the sequels too)

Perfect. Wonderful. I am happy.