Free

You are there again,

becoming the hurt,

invading the insides,

persuading the break.



I still remember what you said,

"It's you and me,

Me and You, forever"

before you fled to Canada

where prices are higher



Can't they give us a chance?

The greatest chances make us free



You were never free

you preached the words

but never practiced the art

A free person wouldn't keep coming back



It's the only place where your

still successful in creating pain



my heart is heavy

and i'm letting the water

hold me down



the water is you

a suffocating mask

that fits like a glove

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Josh Glasgow's picture

Metaphor in the second stanza? Either way, it's the greatest part of the poem.

Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HI,how are you? i keep looking and no new ones,Must be in that love game again lol,ok wishing you the best,lay a few newies down,tell us whats going on in that cancer sweet soul bye
L&P

Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HI,how are you? i keep looking and no new ones,Must be in that love game again lol,ok wishing you the best,lay a few newies down,tell us whats going on in that cancer sweet soul bye
L&P