Theres a chink in my
armored heart,
and the love that it
represents will
Burn more
Vibrantly
than trillions of dying suns.
more
vividly
than the nightmares that still awaken me,
and more
quietly
than the ashes of your picture.
What a powerful metaphor---a trillion dying suns! I have been reading poetry since the Spring of 1973, and I have never seen a metaphor exactly like that one!
J-Called
I like your work...armored hearts have old wounds.
Let your teeth show
Well crafted imagery and tale of love gone. ~allets~
What a powerful metaphor---a
What a powerful metaphor---a trillion dying suns! I have been reading poetry since the Spring of 1973, and I have never seen a metaphor exactly like that one!
J-Called
I like your work...armored
I like your work...armored hearts have old wounds.
Let your teeth show
Quiet Ashes
Well crafted imagery and tale of love gone. ~allets~