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Am I Worthy
Would i throw it all away just for you.
Would i jeaprodise my life to start a new.
Would i hurt so many people in the process.
Would i do all this just for one caress.
Could you promise me the moon and a star every night.
Could you wrap your arms around me and hold me tight.
Could we run far away and have a brand new start.
Could you promise me forever not to break my heart.
Am i just dreaming or is this for real.
Am i really here or is this surreal.
Am i the first to be promised all this.
To throw everything away for one little kiss.
If you were to ask me
could i
would i
am i worthy of true love.
I will leave it in the hands of god above.
HI,what a great line -don't know if it's real or sureal,who really knows lol,wonderful piece here
L&P
Hi Lisa,
You have captured your feelings excellently.
I felt the poem dwelt more on the risk of a new beginning than your worthiness in a relationship. Although the ending is uplifting due to the spirituality and faith you show in God.
I recommend you spell check your work. Some folks dont bother, but I think it detracts from a good poem.
Good luck!
Martin