hurt

I sit alone in my room

thinking of you

while you're thinking of the girl

thats too good to be true

and the tears won't stop falling

and it won't be all right

My heart feels empty

all day and all night

To hear about her

and how perfect she is

I want to be that perfect girl

thats my one and only wish

but shooting stars won't help

and no coins in the pond will do

nothing can make my dream come true:

the dream of being with you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq