lucky girl

I've never been much of anything

I feel like a failure, if that

My grades don't reflect my intelligence

and as a girl, i sometimes think I'm fat

My siblings and I bicker quite often

and my mom and me never agree

But if I take the time to think about it

I start to see the good, in the life of me

I have the ability to love greatly

and the strength to smile when I'm sad

I have some of the most amazing friends

who I know always have my back

At first glimpse, I may seem pathetic

and maybe a little lost in the world

But I've found and seen the real me

and I'm a pretty lucky girl

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wonderful... the poem is done in very rhythmic way and can be visualized too... welcome for comments if you do on my poems too.. hope your comments on my other poems will be there in litle detailed form to add your comments in my new book... your poetry is really impressive and meaningful.... I am known as peace wiher poet and here is my famous say ....((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))hope you keep this say in record and pass on to your friends and fans..