I've never been much of anything
I feel like a failure, if that
My grades don't reflect my intelligence
and as a girl, i sometimes think I'm fat
My siblings and I bicker quite often
and my mom and me never agree
But if I take the time to think about it
I start to see the good, in the life of me
I have the ability to love greatly
and the strength to smile when I'm sad
I have some of the most amazing friends
who I know always have my back
At first glimpse, I may seem pathetic
and maybe a little lost in the world
But I've found and seen the real me
and I'm a pretty lucky girl
wonderful... the poem is done in very rhythmic way and can be visualized too... welcome for comments if you do on my poems too.. hope your comments on my other poems will be there in litle detailed form to add your comments in my new book... your poetry is really impressive and meaningful.... I am known as peace wiher poet and here is my famous say ....((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))hope you keep this say in record and pass on to your friends and fans..