They seem to be coming closer
This is, of course
Impossible, since I have been
Staring at them fall and deepen
The slowly encroaching pool near my feet
The steady plunk--plunk--plunk
Has been my only comfort these last few hours
(days?)
My only comfort in this final lesson
I can hardly feel my legs anymore
They're twisted behind me, crushed and broken
By the unyielding weight
That I dangle from upside down
One would suppose that relief from the flashing pain
My legs had subjected me too
Would be preferable to this numbness
I assure you, it is not
All the numbness reminds me of, is that I'm losing
I'm losing, and the chances of winning
Seem further and further away
At one point, I ran my tongue over my teeth
For a great deal of blood and some other tough,
Fibrous tissue was spilling
Out of my mouth and on to the asphalt
To my surprise, I found
That only my molars were left
Everything else must have been
smashed out when I bounced off the windshield
That's what those
blurry white things near my head must be...
It's difficult to tell really
The one eye that works
Doesn't work that well
The distinct taste of Southern Comfort
Is drying against the roof of my
Torn, ruined mouth
I wonder how fast I was going?
I wonder how fast I am going?
plunk--plunk--plunk
The pool of gas deepens...
...and my lighter is just out of reach
Whew, this one sends chills up my spine.
OK...I just looked at your photo, so this cannot be you that is mangled up. I would say that is a good thing. Great poem here, strong message. :)
Wow... I don't know what to say about this peice. It's beautiful.