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You Should've Heard Her the Other Night
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Junior Year - College You should've heard her the other night
The words, the venom
Dripped from tighened denim
His response was so over the top
Like a syllable in a china shop
She threw her keys at him
He threw his tact to the wind
And when it ended
Tears expended
Fears suspended
You should've heard her the other night
He twisted a pen between his fingers
She counted the lines on her hands
And then she said, to which he stated
So she yelled, so he berated
Diction gone haywire
Phrases stuck like highlighter
Verbal backwash taste like sickly mixes
Poetry penned by triple sixes
Hard to divide villians from heroes
Demonic caesars from the holy Neros
Her slang was vulgar, his eyes pierced her heart
Harsh truths building bridges from canyons apart
But when he spoke, well she admitted
Caused him to wager, facts omitted
This is rather spooky... Gives me chills... I can't help but think he killed her. That's the notion I got, anyways. Either way, I loved it. Definitely something I could find myself reading often...
One thing... Third line... Is it "tightened"? Forgot a "t" if it is... Hehe.
Enjoyed it. Lookin' forward to reading more works.