the sea

The roaring growl of the sea
blue deep that thickens in blood
thee beautiful somber scene
standing in a statue formation
rough grainy skin the sand holds thy hand
breathing life through the toes that wonder
keeping me close to my mother
she brings rosy shells and crisp dollars sold me to the sea
grasps oxygen bitter lungs view the ocean clear
feeds me the encrustations of the ones that scavage around
no sound inhailing the bubbles that float away from the ground
where is he?the fish that scatter away with swift moves of lips that decieve?
a prickle under the sea it defys me?is he the water that fills my lungs with despare
or the unbearable voice that haunts my dreams where i cant wake up to face reality?

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Mardigan's picture

Lovely wording, you have a

Lovely wording, you have a way of phrasing that's quite pleasing, very sweet, almost 'strawberry' like :>.
Keep it up.

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thanks heh strawberries

thanks heh strawberries yup^-^ Ill be sure to check out your work too