Behold..
It's beauty...
It's impenetrable..
It's wings razor sharp.
You dare not touch it,
or it might bleed you.
Permit it to glide around.
Marvel and ponder upon its sensuality,
Until it decides to land upon thee.
A steel butterfly it is.
It's impenetrable
to its opposite.
Hardened through the course of time
from within the confines of this concrete jungle.
Patience!... patience
It can see through your soul
with its keen glance.
You should not turn to stone.
But you can't resist,
The beauty of this steel butterfly gliding in your midst.
Yeah... I'm in love with this
Yeah... I'm in love with this poem and have been working on a poetic response. ;) hopefully soon...
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http://www.postpoems.org/authors/impyshideout/poem/946531
Interesting...
I like this poem a lot, such beautiful and interesting imagery to it.
thank..you
I apreciate your feedback..
I effing LOVE this!
I effing LOVE this!
?
I just posted it.. you like?
Yes I do!
Yes I do!
Iron Butterfly
Rock artists (inagodadavida) - i kept thinking music pounding - hey, I'm strange that way when the butterflies become made of steel ~~A~~
thanks.. Iron Butterfly
what do you think of the poem itself?
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Thank you...
I apreciate your comment.. looking forward to your poetic response..
v/r
Steve
Imply replied.. Can't wait to
Imply replied.. Can't wait to see yours!
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