Crash

 

Crash

 

Crash! Smash!

Spinning around

Whack! Crack!

A terrible sound

 

Screeching brakes

Scratching of metal

A four car pile up

The wreckage has settled

 

Muffled sounds

And distorted voices

So much commotion

From stupid choices

 

People running over

I can’t hear a thing

I look to the driver

She’s not moving

 

Why didn’t I drive?

She said she was fine

I knew she was tired

“Look, I’m driving, don’t whine!”

 

 

It wasn’t just our fault

The surface was wet

We saw a car skid

Destiny was set

 

We were destined to collide

Death was there at the scene

He was rubbing his hands

At this poor dead late-teen

 

She lay there so still

It was clear she was dead

Lying back-bent, so awkward

Blood stained hair down her head

 

I was taken to hospital

In the early hours of day

Lights were fading

Fading to grey

 

Parents at my side

I’m staring at them weep

My eyes closing slowly

I’m falling to sleep…

 

11th Feb 2011

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:( hugs this was well worded,

:( hugs
this was well worded, the flow is a bit choppy but reading it and adding or removing words will help with that and the story behind the words is riveting. I could not help but picture the accident and it made me want to hug you! I am so sorry that you have to live with the pain of surviving a friend.


Much Love

Ashley