Crash
Crash! Smash!
Spinning around
Whack! Crack!
A terrible sound
Screeching brakes
Scratching of metal
A four car pile up
The wreckage has settled
Muffled sounds
And distorted voices
So much commotion
From stupid choices
People running over
I can’t hear a thing
I look to the driver
She’s not moving
Why didn’t I drive?
She said she was fine
I knew she was tired
“Look, I’m driving, don’t whine!”
It wasn’t just our fault
The surface was wet
We saw a car skid
Destiny was set
We were destined to collide
Death was there at the scene
He was rubbing his hands
At this poor dead late-teen
She lay there so still
It was clear she was dead
Lying back-bent, so awkward
Blood stained hair down her head
I was taken to hospital
In the early hours of day
Lights were fading
Fading to grey
Parents at my side
I’m staring at them weep
My eyes closing slowly
I’m falling to sleep…
11th Feb 2011
:( hugs this was well worded,
:( hugs
this was well worded, the flow is a bit choppy but reading it and adding or removing words will help with that and the story behind the words is riveting. I could not help but picture the accident and it made me want to hug you! I am so sorry that you have to live with the pain of surviving a friend.
Much Love
Ashley