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Losing My Mind
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Lost Soul i have being somewhere alone
i used to be a loner
dreaming of a hermit future
enjoying peace and quiet
but now that my life has changed
i have learned to love company
being with those who matter
laughing with others and not alone
everyone is busy
working, spending time with family
but my family isn't here
only my silent tears
i feel like im going insane
i feel the familular chill
of solitude
and i hate it
no one wants to call
or stop by
meet up
or drop a line
someone help me
because i don't know
how much longer
i can last like this
hmmm like it very much... inspiring a lot...it's very sweet and professionally done this poem with deep idea... yeah I am not wrong if I again say it that you are good poet with new subjects to express... sharing it if you will also like my expression of love based peace thoughts also( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) I am sure my this famous say will be satisfying your every worry about the humanity and social life and even friendship...yeah is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..good friend...go on and on...
I am very glad to see a
I am very glad to see a sample of Afzal Shauq's style---from two aspects, his verbalization and the structure of his comment's content: most enlightening indeed. Thanks for preserving it on this poem.
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